
IELTS Worldly · Academic and General Training
Practise IELTS Writing Task 2 with 160 essay questions across 20 topics, 20 Band 9-target sample answers and detailed feedback. Learn how to understand the question, develop your ideas and write clearly under time pressure.
Start with a topic you find difficult, study the matching model, and use the tips and FAQs to improve your next essay. Each topic includes eight questions; its first question has a full model answer.
- 160original practice questions
- 20topics and model essays
- 40practical writing tips
- 72questions answered in the FAQ
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IELTS Writing Task 2: the essentials
IELTS Writing Task 2 is an essay of at least 250 words. Allow about 40 minutes to answer the exact question, explain your ideas and support them with relevant examples. Task 2 carries twice the weight of Task 1 in your Writing score. [1]
| Requirement | What it means for your essay |
|---|---|
| Task | Respond to the point of view, argument or problem in the prompt. Complete every instruction. |
| Length | Minimum 250 words. The models here use around 280–320 words as a practical study range, not an official limit. |
| Time | About 40 minutes within a 60-minute Writing test containing two tasks. |
| Format | A connected essay with paragraphs and full sentences, rather than notes or bullet points. |
| Style | Academic or semi-formal/neutral writing for Academic; semi-formal/neutral discursive writing for General Training. |
| Assessment | Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. |
Requirements: Academic format, General Training format and official scoring guidance. Paragraph plans, timing splits and practice ranges on this page are teaching suggestions.
How to use this resource
- Choose a topic. Open its eight practice questions and select one instruction pattern.
- Plan before reading a model. Write your position and the purpose of each body paragraph.
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Question bank
160 IELTS Writing Task 2 essay questions by topic
Explore education, technology, environment, health, work and other common preparation themes. The categories below are for study coverage; they are not a ranking of exam frequency.
For every practice question: write at least 250 words, explain your reasoning and use relevant illustrations from your knowledge or experience. Choose a position where the instruction asks for one.
- Education and learning
- Technology and artificial intelligence
- Environment and climate
- Health and wellbeing
- Work and careers
- Housing, cities and rural life
- Transport and travel within cities
- Crime, justice and safety
- Family, parenting and children
- Media, advertising and social networks
- Globalisation and languages
- Tourism and international travel
- Government and public spending
- Money, business and consumer behaviour
- Science, research and space
- Culture, history and museums
- Sport, exercise and leisure
- Food, farming and diets
- Animals and the natural world
- Society, equality and community
01. Education and learning
View eight education and learning questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Access → affordable courses → more learners can gain useful qualifications. Curriculum → academic knowledge plus practical application → adaptable graduates.
Common trap: Do not turn a question about university funding into a general essay about why education matters.
Useful vocabulary: equal access: a fair opportunity to participate; practical competence: the ability to perform real tasks; lifelong learning: education throughout adulthood.
- Discussion
Some people believe universities should focus on knowledge for its own sake, while others think they should mainly prepare students for employment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
- Opinion
All university students should pay the full cost of their education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Advantages and disadvantages
More schools are replacing some written examinations with coursework. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this change?
- Causes and solutions
Many adults would like to study but do not enrol in further education. Why is this the case, and what could encourage them to return to learning?
- Outweigh
Some secondary schools require every student to learn a musical instrument. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
- Two-part
In some countries, more students take a gap year before university. Why do they do this, and how can they use this time productively?
- Positive or negative
Universities increasingly offer degrees that can be completed entirely online. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Problems and solutions
Some children leave primary school without adequate reading skills. What problems can this cause, and how can schools address them?
02. Technology and artificial intelligence
View eight technology and artificial intelligence questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Automation → routine tasks become cheaper → time for more complex work. Digital exclusion → lack of devices or skills → unequal access to services.
Common trap: Explain the particular technology in the prompt; do not treat every digital tool as having the same effects.
Useful vocabulary: digital literacy: the ability to use and assess digital tools; automate routine tasks: let machines perform repetitive work; data privacy: control over personal information.
- Opinion
Artificial intelligence tools should replace classroom teachers in secondary education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people think governments should strictly regulate how companies collect personal data, while others believe consumers should make their own choices. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Outweigh
More household tasks can now be performed by smart devices. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
Essential public services are increasingly available only online. What problems can this create, and how can these problems be addressed?
- Positive or negative
Employers are using automated systems to select job applicants. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Causes and effects
People increasingly rely on navigation apps instead of learning routes. Why is this happening, and what effects can it have?
- Two-part
Children are receiving their first smartphones at younger ages. Why do parents allow this, and what rules should families establish?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Many workplaces allow employees to use artificial intelligence to draft reports and emails. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?
03. Environment and climate
View eight environment and climate questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Convenience → disposable goods → more waste. Producer responsibility → repairable products → longer product life. Transport and energy policy → lower emissions.
Common trap: Keep causes, consequences and solutions distinct, and explain how each proposed measure tackles a named cause.
Useful vocabulary: household waste: rubbish produced at home; repairable products: goods that can be fixed; financial incentive: a monetary reason to change behaviour.
- Causes and solutions
Households in many places produce large amounts of waste. What are the main causes of this problem, and what measures could reduce it?
- Opinion
Environmental protection is primarily the responsibility of governments rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people favour higher taxes on fossil fuels, while others prefer subsidies for clean energy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Outweigh
Cities are replacing some car parking areas with green spaces. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
Noise pollution affects many urban neighbourhoods. What problems does it cause, and how can local authorities reduce it?
- Positive or negative
More businesses advertise the environmental benefits of their products. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some towns charge households according to the amount of rubbish they throw away. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this system?
- Two-part
Many people know about climate change but make few changes to their lifestyles. Why does this happen, and which changes are most realistic for ordinary households?
04. Health and wellbeing
View eight health and wellbeing questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Prevention → affordable healthy choices → fewer avoidable illnesses. Treatment → access regardless of income → a healthier workforce.
Common trap: Avoid blaming all illness on personal choices or making unsupported medical claims.
Useful vocabulary: preventive healthcare: action intended to prevent illness; public health: the health of a population; affordable treatment: care people can pay for.
- Discussion
Some people think individuals should be responsible for maintaining their health, while others believe governments should take the main responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
- Opinion
Governments should spend more on preventing illness than on treating it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Causes and solutions
Many office workers do too little physical activity. What causes this problem, and how could it be reduced?
- Outweigh
More medical consultations are taking place online. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
People in rural areas often have difficulty accessing healthcare. What problems result from this, and what solutions are possible?
- Positive or negative
People increasingly use wearable devices to track their health. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Many people experience stress at work. What are the main reasons, and what responsibilities do employers have in addressing it?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some governments tax foods and drinks that contain large amounts of sugar. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
05. Work and careers
View eight work and careers questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Flexibility → less commuting → more usable time. Training → skills adapt → better employment prospects. Security → predictable income → easier planning.
Common trap: Distinguish benefits for employees from benefits for employers when the question names both.
Useful vocabulary: flexible working: choice over when or where work is done; career progression: movement towards more responsible work; job security: confidence that employment will continue.
- Outweigh
More employees whose jobs can be done remotely are working mainly from home. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
- Discussion
Some people value a high salary above job satisfaction, while others consider enjoyable work more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Opinion
Employers should provide paid time for workers to learn new skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Causes and effects
Many people change careers several times during their working lives. Why does this happen, and what effects does it have on workers?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some companies are introducing a four-day working week without reducing salaries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
Young people often struggle to find their first full-time job. What problems can this cause, and how can governments and employers help?
- Positive or negative
More people are choosing self-employment instead of working for an organisation. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Some employees continue working after the usual retirement age. Why do they make this choice, and how should employers respond?
06. Housing, cities and rural life
View eight housing, cities and rural life questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Jobs concentrated in cities → stronger housing demand → higher rents. Better regional services → attractive alternatives → less pressure on major cities.
Common trap: For housing affordability, explain the relationship between income, demand and available homes rather than discussing architecture alone.
Useful vocabulary: housing supply: the number of homes available; affordable housing: homes within residents’ financial reach; urban sprawl: expansion into surrounding land.
- Causes and effects
Housing in major cities has become unaffordable for many workers. What are the main causes, and how does this affect individuals and society?
- Discussion
Some people prefer living in large cities, while others prefer rural areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Opinion
Local governments should prioritise renovating existing buildings over constructing new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Problems and solutions
Rural communities are losing many of their young residents. What problems does this create, and how can these communities retain young people?
- Advantages and disadvantages
More families are living in high-rise apartment buildings. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Outweigh
Some cities encourage people to live in smaller homes near their workplaces. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Positive or negative
Shopping centres increasingly provide spaces for leisure and social activities as well as shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Neighbours in some urban areas rarely know one another. Why is this, and what could encourage stronger local relationships?
07. Transport and travel within cities
View eight transport and travel within cities questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Reliable buses → viable alternative to driving → fewer cars. Safe routes → more walking and cycling → healthier, more accessible streets.
Common trap: Free fares and a reliable service are different policies; explain which barrier each policy removes.
Useful vocabulary: public transport network: connected bus, rail and other services; traffic congestion: crowded roads that slow vehicles; reliable service: transport that runs as expected.
- Positive or negative
Some cities are making all public transport free to use. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Opinion
Governments should spend more on public transport than on new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people support charging drivers to enter city centres, while others consider such charges unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Causes and solutions
Many people drive short distances that they could walk or cycle. Why does this happen, and how can it be changed?
- Outweigh
City centres are increasingly being closed to private cars. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
Long daily commutes are common in large cities. What problems do they cause, and what measures could reduce these problems?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some cities allow companies to rent electric scooters in public spaces. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Two-part
Many teenagers learn to drive as soon as they are legally allowed. Why is driving important to them, and should schools teach road safety?
08. Crime, justice and safety
View eight crime, justice and safety questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Rehabilitation → skills and stable work → fewer incentives to reoffend. Prevention → safer environments and support → fewer opportunities for crime.
Common trap: Avoid treating all offences and offenders alike; distinguish serious danger from suitable cases for non-custodial sentences.
Useful vocabulary: rehabilitation: helping offenders return to lawful life; reoffending: committing another offence; proportionate punishment: a penalty that matches the seriousness of an offence.
- Opinion
Community service should replace prison sentences for all non-violent offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people believe longer prison sentences are the best way to reduce crime, while others favour better rehabilitation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Causes and solutions
Some young people become involved in crime. What factors contribute to this, and what can communities do to prevent it?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Police forces increasingly use cameras in public spaces. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach?
- Two-part
Some people do not report crimes they witness. Why is this, and how can reporting be encouraged?
- Problems and solutions
People released from prison often struggle to find employment. What problems can this cause, and what support should be available?
- Positive or negative
Some schools teach children about the criminal justice system. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Outweigh
Some minor legal disputes are now settled through online services. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
09. Family, parenting and children
View eight family, parenting and children questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Childcare costs → later parenthood → more time to build savings. Shared care → wider support network → less pressure on one caregiver.
Common trap: Discuss the family arrangements in the prompt without assuming every household has the same income, culture or structure.
Useful vocabulary: financial stability: a dependable financial position; childcare responsibilities: duties involved in caring for children; parental leave: time away from work to care for a new child.
- Mixed: reasons and outweigh
Many adults choose to have their first child later in life. Why is this happening, and do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Discussion
Some people think children should follow strict rules at home, while others believe they should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Opinion
Both parents should receive equal amounts of paid parental leave. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Problems and solutions
Some families rarely eat meals together. What problems can this cause, and how can families make shared meals easier?
- Advantages and disadvantages
In some families, grandparents provide most of the childcare while parents work. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Causes and effects
More young adults continue living with their parents after finishing their education. Why is this happening, and what effects can it have?
- Positive or negative
Children are increasingly involved in decisions about family spending and holidays. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Many parents organise numerous activities for their children outside school. Why do they do this, and how much unstructured time should children have?
10. Media, advertising and social networks
View eight media, advertising and social networks questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Repeated exposure → familiarity → stronger purchase pressure. Media literacy → source checking → more informed decisions.
Common trap: For advertising questions, distinguish information about products from persuasion aimed at vulnerable audiences.
Useful vocabulary: commercial pressure: pressure to buy or sell; targeted advertising: marketing directed at a specific audience; reliable source: a source with trustworthy information.
- Opinion
Advertising aimed at young children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people think news organisations should focus on positive developments, while others believe reporting problems is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Problems and solutions
False information spreads quickly on social media. What problems does this cause, and what can be done to reduce its spread?
- Outweigh
Many people receive most of their news through social media. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Causes and effects
Online influencers have become important in advertising. Why has this happened, and how does it affect consumers?
- Positive or negative
More ordinary people can publish their opinions to large audiences online. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some news websites require readers to pay a subscription. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this model?
- Two-part
Many people avoid following the news. Why do they do this, and how might this affect society?
11. Globalisation and languages
View eight globalisation and languages questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Shared languages → easier communication → access to work and study. Local language loss → fewer speakers → weaker cultural transmission.
Common trap: Separate learning an international language from abandoning a local language; the two do not have to happen together.
Useful vocabulary: linguistic diversity: the variety of languages; cultural transmission: passing knowledge between generations; bilingual education: teaching through two languages.
- Problems and solutions
Some local languages are being used by fewer people. What problems can this cause, and what can be done to protect these languages?
- Opinion
Every schoolchild should learn at least one foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people believe global brands improve consumer choice, while others think they weaken local businesses and cultures. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Advantages and disadvantages
More people move abroad for work. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the people who move?
- Outweigh
International companies employ teams whose members live in different countries. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Positive or negative
People around the world increasingly watch the same films and television programmes. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Causes and effects
More university courses are being taught in English in countries where it is not the main language. Why is this happening, and what effects can it have?
- Two-part
International student exchanges are becoming more accessible. What can students learn from them, and what support do they need to benefit fully?
12. Tourism and international travel
View eight tourism and international travel questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Visitors → demand for local services → jobs. Concentrated tourism → pressure on housing and infrastructure → costs for residents.
Common trap: Tourism benefits do not automatically reach local residents; explain who owns the businesses and who receives the income.
Useful vocabulary: seasonal employment: work available during part of the year; visitor spending: money tourists spend; local infrastructure: roads, services and facilities in an area.
- Advantages and disadvantages
Many regions rely heavily on international tourism for income. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?
- Opinion
Tourists should pay higher entrance fees than local residents at publicly funded cultural attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people prefer travelling independently, while others favour organised tours. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Problems and solutions
Popular destinations can become overcrowded with visitors. What problems does this create, and how can they be managed?
- Outweigh
Low-cost air travel allows more people to take overseas holidays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Causes and effects
More travellers choose holidays in remote natural areas. Why is this happening, and how can it affect those areas?
- Positive or negative
Tourists increasingly stay in homes rented through online platforms rather than hotels. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Some people travel mainly to photograph places for social media. Why has this trend developed, and how might it affect their experience?
13. Government and public spending
View eight government and public spending questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Limited budgets → competing needs → explicit priorities. Public investment → shared facilities → benefits beyond individual buyers.
Common trap: An argument for funding one service does not prove that every other service should receive nothing.
Useful vocabulary: public expenditure: government spending; essential services: basic services people rely on; opportunity cost: the benefit given up by choosing another use of resources.
- Discussion
Some people believe governments should fund the arts, while others think public money should be spent only on essential services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
- Opinion
Public libraries are no longer necessary because information is available online. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some governments provide every adult with a regular payment regardless of employment status. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
- Two-part
Citizens often disagree about how public money should be spent. Why is this, and how can governments involve them in decisions?
- Outweigh
Governments increasingly allow private companies to run public services. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
Some public facilities are poorly maintained. What problems does this cause, and how can local authorities improve maintenance?
- Positive or negative
More government services allow people to complete applications without visiting an office. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Causes and solutions
Some people do not trust public institutions. What can cause this lack of trust, and what could restore it?
14. Money, business and consumer behaviour
View eight money, business and consumer behaviour questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Convenient payment → easier transactions → risk of unnoticed spending. Financial education → better budgeting → greater resilience to unexpected costs.
Common trap: Explain mechanisms rather than claiming that all economic growth makes everyone wealthier.
Useful vocabulary: financial inclusion: access to useful financial services; disposable income: money available after taxes; consumer protection: measures that safeguard buyers.
- Positive or negative
More shops and services are accepting only electronic payments. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Opinion
Schools should teach all students how to manage personal finances. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people believe businesses should focus only on profit, while others say they also have responsibilities to society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Causes and solutions
Many young adults find it difficult to save money. What are the main reasons, and what could help them save?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Consumers increasingly buy products through online marketplaces. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Outweigh
Large supermarkets are replacing small independent shops in some areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Two-part
Some people buy new products even when their existing possessions still work. Why do they do this, and how can more responsible consumption be encouraged?
- Problems and solutions
Small businesses often struggle to compete with large companies. What problems can this create for communities, and what support could be useful?
15. Science, research and space
View eight science, research and space questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Basic research → new knowledge → possible future applications. Public funding → accountability → attention to needs the market may neglect.
Common trap: Avoid claiming every research project produces immediate benefits; distinguish plausible applications from guaranteed results.
Useful vocabulary: basic research: work that expands knowledge without an immediate commercial goal; practical application: a real-world use; research funding: money used to support investigation.
- Opinion
Governments should stop funding space exploration until all basic needs on Earth have been met. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people think scientific research should be controlled by governments, while others favour private companies. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Advantages and disadvantages
Scientific findings are increasingly shared freely online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?
- Two-part
Many students do not choose science subjects at university. Why might this happen, and how can interest in science be encouraged?
- Outweigh
Countries sometimes collaborate on very expensive research projects. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Positive or negative
Home devices now collect data that can be used in scientific research. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Problems and solutions
Scientific information can be difficult for the public to understand. What problems can result, and how can scientists communicate more effectively?
- Causes and effects
Businesses invest heavily in technologies that make everyday tasks faster. Why do they do this, and how does this affect people’s lives?
16. Culture, history and museums
View eight culture, history and museums questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Original objects → direct contact with evidence → understanding of history. Digital interpretation → accessible explanations → wider participation.
Common trap: Do not assume tradition is always beneficial or always outdated; evaluate the specific practice and its effects.
Useful vocabulary: cultural heritage: inherited traditions and historic material; historical evidence: information about the past; public access: the ability of ordinary people to use a resource.
- Discussion
Some people think museums should focus on original objects, while others believe interactive technology is the best way to engage visitors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
- Opinion
Historic buildings should be preserved even when doing so is expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Traditional festivals are increasingly promoted as tourist attractions. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Two-part
Some young people show little interest in their country’s history. Why is this, and how could their interest be increased?
- Positive or negative
People increasingly experience concerts and exhibitions online. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Problems and solutions
Traditional crafts are disappearing in some communities. What problems can this cause, and how could these crafts be preserved?
- Outweigh
Public museums sometimes lend important objects to museums in other countries. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Causes and effects
Traditional forms of dress are worn less often in everyday life. Why is this happening, and how might it affect cultural identity?
17. Sport, exercise and leisure
View eight sport, exercise and leisure questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Local facilities → affordable participation → lasting health and social benefits. Elite success → public interest → participation only if opportunities exist.
Common trap: Winning medals and improving public health are different outcomes; show how spending connects to the outcome you prioritise.
Useful vocabulary: grassroots sport: sport organised at local community level; inclusive facilities: spaces that different groups can use; regular participation: consistent involvement in an activity.
- Opinion
Governments should prioritise community sports facilities over funding elite athletes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people think competition is essential in children’s sport, while others believe enjoyment and cooperation matter more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Outweigh
Some cities spend large sums hosting international sporting events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Causes and solutions
Many teenagers stop participating in sport. Why does this happen, and what can encourage them to remain active?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Professional athletes increasingly earn income from advertising. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Positive or negative
Watching competitive video gaming has become a popular leisure activity. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Some people spend most of their free time alone. Why do they choose this, and when can it be beneficial?
- Problems and solutions
Public sports facilities may be inaccessible to people with disabilities. What problems does this create, and how can access be improved?
18. Food, farming and diets
View eight food, farming and diets questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Imports → wider choice and seasonal supply → access gains. Long supply chains → disruption and environmental costs → need for resilient sourcing.
Common trap: Avoid claiming all imported food has a larger environmental footprint; production and transport methods matter.
Useful vocabulary: food security: reliable access to enough food; supply chain: the stages between production and consumption; seasonal produce: food grown at its usual time of year.
- Mixed: reasons and evaluation
Supermarkets sell more food imported from other countries than they did in the past. Why is this happening, and is it a positive or negative development?
- Opinion
Governments should support small farms even when larger farms produce food more cheaply. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people believe schools should provide meals for all children, while others think families should be responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Causes and solutions
Large quantities of edible food are thrown away by households. Why does this happen, and how can it be reduced?
- Outweigh
More people buy ready-made meals instead of cooking from basic ingredients. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some cities encourage residents to grow food in shared gardens. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Problems and solutions
Farmers in some regions have difficulty attracting younger workers. What problems can this cause, and what could encourage young people to enter farming?
- Two-part
Consumers increasingly want to know how their food was produced. Why is this, and how should food companies respond?
19. Animals and the natural world
View eight animals and the natural world questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Habitat protection → food and shelter for many species → wider ecological benefits. Species rescue → immediate help → limited if habitat remains unsafe.
Common trap: Distinguish protecting a habitat from protecting one animal, and avoid treating conservation choices as always mutually exclusive.
Useful vocabulary: habitat loss: destruction of places where species live; endangered species: species at risk of extinction; ecological balance: relationships that help an ecosystem function.
- Opinion
Protecting natural habitats should be a higher priority than protecting individual endangered species. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Discussion
Some people believe zoos support conservation, while others think keeping wild animals in captivity is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Problems and solutions
Wild animals increasingly enter areas where people live. What problems can this cause, and how should communities respond?
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some national parks allow carefully controlled wildlife tourism. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
- Two-part
Many people spend large amounts of money on pets. Why do they do this, and what responsibilities should pet owners have?
- Outweigh
Schools sometimes organise visits to farms so children can learn about animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Positive or negative
More consumers choose products labelled as free from animal testing. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Causes and solutions
Plastic waste harms animals in rivers and oceans. Why does this waste enter waterways, and what measures could prevent it?
20. Society, equality and community
View eight society, equality and community questions, ideas and vocabulary
Ideas to explore: Shared activities → repeated contact → stronger relationships. Inclusive services → fewer participation barriers → wider social contribution.
Common trap: Discuss groups respectfully and recognise differences within them; do not assume age, gender or income determines ability.
Useful vocabulary: civic participation: involvement in community life; equal opportunity: a fair chance to succeed; social inclusion: enabling people to take part in society.
- Advantages and disadvantages
Some schools require students to complete unpaid community service before graduation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this requirement?
- Discussion
Some people think older relatives should live with their families, while others favour independent living with professional support. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Opinion
Employers should select staff solely on ability, without considering age or gender. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Problems and solutions
Many older people experience loneliness. What problems can this cause, and what can communities do to help?
- Causes and effects
Fewer people take part in local community organisations in some places. Why does this happen, and what effects can it have?
- Outweigh
Some countries encourage retirees to take on paid or voluntary work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Positive or negative
People increasingly raise money for social causes through online platforms. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Two-part
Access to cultural and leisure activities often depends on income. Why does this matter, and what could make these activities more accessible?
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20 Band 9-target sample essays with feedback
Each model answers the first question in one topic group. Open it to read the exact question, a brief plan, the complete essay, feedback under all four criteria and a practice exercise.
Word counts are approximate and cover the essay only, excluding the question, plan and feedback. Hyphenated expressions count as one item in these displayed counts.
- Should universities prioritise knowledge or employment?
- Should artificial intelligence replace teachers?
- Why do households produce so much waste?
- Who should take responsibility for health?
- Does working from home bring greater benefits than drawbacks?
- Why is city housing unaffordable, and what are the effects?
- Is free public transport a positive development?
- Should community service replace prison for every non-violent offence?
- Why do adults become parents later, and do the benefits outweigh the costs?
- Should advertising aimed at young children be banned?
- What happens when local languages decline?
- What are the benefits and risks of relying on tourism?
- Should governments fund the arts or only essential services?
- Are cashless-only shops a positive development?
- Should space funding stop until basic needs are met?
- Should museums prioritise original objects or interactive technology?
- Should community sport take priority over elite athletes?
- Why is more food imported, and is this beneficial?
- Should habitats take priority over individual endangered species?
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of compulsory volunteering?
01. Should universities prioritise knowledge or employment?
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Practice question 1
Some people believe universities should focus on knowledge for its own sake, while others think they should mainly prepare students for employment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Plan: Explain the value of intellectual enquiry; explain the need for employable skills; argue that universities should connect the two.
Model essay
Universities are expected both to advance knowledge and to prepare people for work. Although an education that ignores employment would fail many students, I believe universities serve society best when practical preparation rests on a broad intellectual foundation.
Studying a subject beyond its immediate commercial uses develops habits that remain valuable when particular jobs change. A history student, for example, learns to compare conflicting accounts, assess evidence and distinguish a plausible claim from an established fact. These abilities can later support work in journalism, administration or business, even though the degree does not train the student for one specific occupation. Universities also need room for research whose benefits are not yet apparent. If funding depended entirely on immediate market demand, potentially valuable areas of enquiry could disappear before their usefulness became clear. The public value of higher education therefore extends beyond graduates’ first jobs.
Nevertheless, students invest considerable time and money in their studies, so expecting help with employment is reasonable. A graduate who understands economic theory but cannot interpret a basic financial dataset may struggle to demonstrate that knowledge at work. Universities can address this problem through placements, practical projects and explicit instruction in relevant professional methods. These additions need not displace intellectual depth. An engineering course, for instance, can require students to design an affordable water system while examining the scientific principles and ethical choices behind it. Employers then gain graduates who can perform useful tasks and question whether existing practices should improve, rather than merely follow established procedures.
In conclusion, employment preparation is an essential university responsibility, but it should not define the entire curriculum. Combining rigorous study with opportunities to apply it gives graduates both an initial route into work and the capacity to adapt throughout their careers.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Both views receive a reasoned explanation. The final position integrates them, and the engineering example shows how that integration would work.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The argument moves from the long-term value of knowledge to the immediate needs of graduates. “These abilities” links the history example to its consequences.
- Lexical Resource
- “Intellectual foundation”, “market demand” and “professional methods” express distinct ideas precisely without unnecessary jargon.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Conditional, relative and concessive clauses serve the reasoning. Shorter sentences keep the longer examples readable.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
02. Should artificial intelligence replace teachers?
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Practice question 9
Artificial intelligence tools should replace classroom teachers in secondary education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: Accept the usefulness of personalised practice, then explain why accountability and human understanding make replacement inappropriate.
Model essay
Artificial intelligence can explain concepts, generate exercises and provide rapid feedback. These capabilities make it a valuable classroom resource, but I disagree that it should replace secondary school teachers. Education involves interpreting human needs and taking responsibility for children, as well as delivering information.
The strongest argument for automated teaching is its ability to respond to individual differences. In a large class, one pupil may need further practice with fractions while another is ready for algebra. A well-designed system can offer each learner suitable exercises without making the whole group move at the same speed. It can also provide explanations outside school hours, when a teacher is unavailable. However, an answer produced confidently is not necessarily accurate, and a pupil may lack the knowledge to recognise a mistake. The teacher therefore remains necessary to select appropriate material, check doubtful explanations and connect separate exercises to a coherent course of study.
More fundamentally, a classroom is a social environment. A teenager who stops participating might be confused, anxious or experiencing difficulties at home; the same behaviour can have very different causes. A teacher can speak privately with the student, consult colleagues and adapt expectations in a way that takes this context into account. Teachers also organise discussions in which pupils practise listening, disagreeing respectfully and accepting responsibility for shared work. Replacing them with software would leave unclear who should notice problems, make sensitive decisions and answer for the consequences. Providing devices alone would not resolve these responsibilities, particularly in schools where students already receive little support elsewhere.
AI should therefore assist teachers with routine practice and feedback while teachers retain responsibility for instruction and care. This arrangement captures the benefits of personalisation without reducing education to a sequence of automatically marked tasks.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The answer directly rejects replacement while recognising assistance as useful. Both bodies explain why a teacher remains necessary.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The first body addresses academic support; the second expands to social responsibilities. The conclusion returns to this division of roles.
- Lexical Resource
- “Individual differences”, “coherent course of study” and “sensitive decisions” are accurate combinations suited to the topic.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- The conditional idea in “A teenager who stops participating might…” allows a cautious claim. Parallel verbs make the teacher’s actions easy to follow.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
03. Why do households produce so much waste?
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Practice question 17
Households in many places produce large amounts of waste. What are the main causes of this problem, and what measures could reduce it?
Plan: Connect disposable packaging and short product lifespans to two matched responses: reusable systems and affordable repair.
Model essay
Large amounts of household waste result partly from how products are sold and partly from how difficult they are to keep using. Reducing this waste requires changes to packaging and product design, supported by convenient alternatives for consumers.
One major cause is the widespread use of packaging intended to be discarded immediately. Small portions and individually wrapped items are convenient, especially for people shopping in a hurry, but they create rubbish each time a product is consumed. Households may have little choice if nearby shops do not offer alternatives. Another cause is the replacement of goods that could otherwise last longer. When a damaged appliance is expensive to repair, or spare parts are unavailable, buying a new one can appear the only sensible option. Waste is consequently built into ordinary purchasing decisions rather than simply reflecting a lack of concern among consumers.
The most effective responses should make avoiding waste practical. Retailers could offer refill stations for commonly used products and accept reusable containers through clear, hygienic procedures. Deposit schemes could encourage customers to return suitable packaging instead of throwing it away. For durable goods, governments could require manufacturers to provide repair information and spare parts for a reasonable period. Combined with accessible local repair services, this would make replacement less attractive when a minor fault occurs. Public information still matters: households need clear guidance on storage, reuse and local disposal arrangements. Yet information alone is unlikely to achieve much if the less wasteful option remains inconvenient or substantially more expensive.
In conclusion, disposable packaging and obstacles to repair are important drivers of household waste. Policies that change the choices available in shops and extend the useful life of products are more likely to succeed than simply asking people to throw less away.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Two causes are developed and directly matched to measures. The answer explains why awareness alone may have limited effect.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Packaging and repair appear in the same order in the cause and solution paragraphs, making the relationships easy to track.
- Lexical Resource
- “Spare parts”, “deposit schemes” and “durable goods” give precise names to the mechanisms discussed.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- When-clauses explain decisions; conditional language avoids overstating results. Sentence boundaries remain clear despite several policy details.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
04. Who should take responsibility for health?
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Practice question 25
Some people think individuals should be responsible for maintaining their health, while others believe governments should take the main responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Plan: Explain personal choices; explain the conditions government controls; support shared responsibility with a larger public role in enabling healthy choices.
Model essay
People make daily decisions that affect their health, but those decisions are shaped by the circumstances in which they live. While individuals must take reasonable care of themselves, I believe governments bear the greater responsibility for creating conditions that make good health achievable.
Personal responsibility matters because public services cannot make every choice on someone’s behalf. An individual who has access to safe exercise spaces and affordable nutritious food still decides whether to use them. Building regular activity into a daily routine, for instance, requires effort that a government campaign cannot supply. People also need to follow appropriate medical advice and seek help when necessary. Emphasising these responsibilities can encourage active participation in health rather than the assumption that treatment will always repair the consequences of avoidable risks. This argument is strongest where people genuinely have the resources and freedom to choose.
However, treating health mainly as a personal matter overlooks substantial differences in opportunity. A worker living beside a polluted road cannot remove the traffic by making better lifestyle choices. Similarly, a family with a limited budget may struggle to obtain fresh food or timely healthcare even when its members understand their value. Governments can address such barriers through environmental regulation, accessible services and planning that makes walking and recreation safe. These measures benefit whole communities, including children who have little control over their surroundings. Public responsibility is therefore not a substitute for individual effort; it creates the conditions under which that effort can be effective and prevents disadvantages from becoming lasting health inequalities.
Overall, individuals should act responsibly within their circumstances, but governments should ensure those circumstances do not make healthy living unattainable. A fair health policy combines personal agency with collective protection, giving particular attention to people whose choices are most constrained.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Both perspectives are explored, and the writer gives a clear judgement about their relative importance. Examples distinguish choice from limited opportunity.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The final sentence of the first body prepares the shift to unequal circumstances in the second.
- Lexical Resource
- “Personal agency”, “environmental regulation” and “health inequalities” are precise; surrounding explanations keep the meaning accessible.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Concessive and comparative structures support a qualified opinion. The relative clause about children adds relevant detail without a separate digression.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
05. Does working from home bring greater benefits than drawbacks?
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Practice question 33
More employees whose jobs can be done remotely are working mainly from home. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Plan: Acknowledge isolation and coordination costs; compare them with recurring time savings and wider access to suitable employment.
Model essay
Working mainly from home has become a realistic option for many employees whose duties do not require a physical presence. Although this arrangement can weaken informal contact and complicate teamwork, I believe its advantages are greater when employers organise remote work deliberately.
The principal disadvantages concern communication and separation from colleagues. In an office, a new employee can often resolve a minor uncertainty simply by asking someone nearby. At home, the same issue may require a scheduled call or remain unresolved because the employee hesitates to interrupt others. Informal learning can therefore suffer, especially for inexperienced staff. Some workers also find it difficult to end the working day when their workplace is their living room. Without clear expectations, flexibility can turn into a sense of permanent availability. These are substantial costs, but mentoring arrangements, agreed contact hours and occasional meetings can reduce them without requiring daily attendance.
The benefits are more persistent because they affect how employees use their time and where they can seek work. Eliminating a long commute frees time every working day for rest, family responsibilities or exercise. It can also make a suitable position accessible to someone who cannot afford to live near an expensive business district. An experienced designer, for example, may contribute effectively from a smaller town while remaining close to relatives who need support. Employers benefit from considering such applicants instead of limiting recruitment to people within commuting distance. Unlike a minor office convenience, this flexibility can determine whether a person is able to accept and sustain a job at all.
On balance, the daily gains in time and access to employment outweigh the communication difficulties, provided remote workers receive proper support. The goal should be a well-managed working arrangement, with clear boundaries and opportunities for contact, rather than an expectation that employees remain constantly connected.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The essay explicitly weighs the sides: recurring access and time benefits are judged more substantial than manageable communication costs.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The drawback paragraph ends with mitigation, creating a logical basis for the comparison in the benefits paragraph.
- Lexical Resource
- “Informal learning”, “commuting distance” and “permanent availability” capture different aspects of remote work.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Provided- and although-clauses express conditions and concessions. The conclusion preserves the qualification introduced at the start.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
06. Why is city housing unaffordable, and what are the effects?
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Practice question 41
Housing in major cities has become unaffordable for many workers. What are the main causes, and how does this affect individuals and society?
Plan: Explain the mismatch between concentrated demand and limited supply; show consequences for households and essential services.
Model essay
Many urban workers struggle to find housing they can afford, even when they have stable employment. This problem largely reflects strong demand in places where new homes are slow to become available, and its consequences extend from household finances to the functioning of entire cities.
Employment and educational opportunities tend to attract people to the same urban centres. When more residents compete for a limited number of homes, rents and purchase prices can rise faster than local wages. Housing supply may respond slowly because suitable land is scarce, construction takes time and planning decisions are complex. In some neighbourhoods, homes are also used for short stays rather than long-term residence, further reducing the options available to workers. These pressures are especially difficult for people in necessary but modestly paid occupations. Having a job does not guarantee affordability when housing costs are determined by buyers and tenants with much greater spending power.
For individuals, high housing costs leave less money for savings and other needs. A family may accept an overcrowded flat or move far from work, exchanging lower rent for a lengthy and costly journey. Constant uncertainty about future rent can also make long-term decisions harder, including whether to have children or undertake further study. At the city level, the effects become visible when teachers, care workers and service staff cannot live within a reasonable distance of their jobs. Employers may struggle to retain workers, while roads and transport systems face additional commuting pressure. Neighbourhoods can also lose social variety as households with similar incomes become concentrated in separate areas.
In conclusion, city housing becomes unaffordable when concentrated demand outpaces the supply of suitable homes. The result is not merely personal financial strain: it can disrupt essential employment, lengthen journeys and make urban communities increasingly divided by income.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The response answers causes and effects, rather than drifting into a solution essay. It covers individuals and society, as requested.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Demand and supply lead naturally to affordability pressures, then to household choices and wider city consequences.
- Lexical Resource
- “Long-term residence”, “spending power” and “social variety” fit the argument and are explained through examples.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Relative clauses identify affected workers. Modals such as “may” and “can” avoid claiming that every city has identical outcomes.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
07. Is free public transport a positive development?
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Practice question 49
Some cities are making all public transport free to use. Is this a positive or negative development?
Plan: Judge the change mainly positive because of access and affordability; examine funding and service quality as conditions for success.
Model essay
Removing fares from public transport can make a city easier to navigate and reduce the cost of everyday travel. I consider this a mainly positive development, although its success depends on maintaining a service that people can genuinely rely on.
The clearest benefit is improved access for residents with limited incomes. A journey that seems inexpensive to one person may prevent another from attending a training course, visiting relatives or applying for work across the city. When travel is free, these decisions become less dependent on the immediate contents of a household’s budget. The policy can also simplify journeys by removing the need to understand different tickets or payment systems. This is particularly helpful to occasional passengers and visitors. If buses and trains have sufficient capacity, making better use of them can allow more people to move around without adding the same number of private vehicles to crowded streets.
Nevertheless, removing fares does not remove the cost of operating the network. Drivers must be paid, vehicles maintained and routes adjusted as demand changes. A city that abolishes fares but cuts frequency to compensate may offer a service that is free yet impractical. Nor will all drivers switch simply because tickets disappear: a bus that takes much longer than a car remains unattractive to someone with a tight schedule. Free travel should therefore be financed through a dependable public budget and accompanied by attention to routes, reliability and accessibility. Where resources are limited, improving the service and providing targeted discounts may be a sensible first stage.
Overall, free public transport is positive when it expands real opportunities to travel, particularly for people previously restricted by cost. Its value should be judged by the journeys it enables and the quality it sustains, rather than by the removal of fares alone.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The writer gives an overall positive judgement and explains a meaningful limitation. The answer evaluates free fares specifically.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The second body tests whether the first body’s benefits will materialise, so the qualification strengthens rather than contradicts the position.
- Lexical Resource
- “Sufficient capacity”, “targeted discounts” and “dependable public budget” are precise transport-policy expressions.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- The concessive construction “free yet impractical” is concise. A conditional sentence links limited resources to a staged policy.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
08. Should community service replace prison for every non-violent offence?
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Practice question 57
Community service should replace prison sentences for all non-violent offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: Agree that community sentences often support rehabilitation; reject the absolute word “all” because seriousness and repeated offending vary.
Model essay
Community service can hold offenders accountable without removing them from everyday life. I support its wider use for suitable non-violent offences, but disagree that it should replace imprisonment in every such case. The absence of physical violence does not necessarily mean an offence causes little harm.
For less serious offences, a community sentence can combine punishment with a realistic opportunity to change. An offender required to spend weekends maintaining public spaces loses free time and makes a visible contribution, while remaining able to work and support dependants. This continuity matters because losing a job or home can create further difficulties that make lawful reintegration harder. Community service may also expose offenders to constructive relationships and responsibilities. However, it should involve meaningful supervision and tasks suited to the individual’s circumstances. Without these conditions, it risks becoming a nominal penalty that neither reassures the public nor helps the person develop more responsible behaviour.
An absolute replacement policy would nevertheless overlook the seriousness of some non-violent crimes. A person who deliberately steals the savings of vulnerable people may cause lasting insecurity without physically attacking anyone. If the loss is extensive, or the offender repeatedly ignores previous sanctions, community work alone may not provide a proportionate response. Courts also need ways to restrict people who continue to pose a serious risk of further offending. This does not justify automatically imprisoning everyone convicted of fraud or theft. It means that sentencing should consider the scale of the harm, the offender’s conduct and the likelihood that a community penalty will be effective.
In conclusion, community service deserves a substantial role in responding to non-violent crime, particularly where it preserves stable employment and supports rehabilitation. Judges should still retain the option of imprisonment for serious or persistent offending, rather than being bound by an inflexible rule.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The answer targets “all” and maintains a clear partial agreement. It does not confuse non-violent offences with harmless offences.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- A suitable use of community service is followed by a boundary case that explains why judicial discretion is needed.
- Lexical Resource
- “Proportionate response”, “reintegration” and “nominal penalty” express specific distinctions; context makes their meanings clear.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- The opening uses a controlled contrast, and later if-clauses show the circumstances that change the judgement.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
09. Why do adults become parents later, and do the benefits outweigh the costs?
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Practice question 65
Many adults choose to have their first child later in life. Why is this happening, and do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Plan: Identify financial and personal reasons; compare greater readiness with a shorter period of support across generations; give a qualified overall judgement.
Model essay
Many adults now postpone having their first child until they feel established in other areas of life. Financial pressures and changing personal priorities help explain this choice. In my view, the benefits generally outweigh the drawbacks when the delay allows people to become more prepared parents.
One reason for postponement is the difficulty of combining childcare with insecure employment and expensive housing. Adults may want a dependable income and a suitable home before accepting a long-term responsibility. Education and career development can also occupy much of early adulthood. Beyond financial concerns, some people want time to build a stable relationship or decide whether parenthood is right for them. Later parenthood can therefore reflect a considered decision rather than simply a preference for professional success over family life.
The main advantage is greater practical and emotional readiness. Parents with savings and predictable working arrangements may be better able to pay for childcare or reduce their hours when necessary. Experience of managing relationships and setbacks can also help them respond patiently to a child’s needs. These benefits are not guaranteed by age, but the additional time can provide an opportunity to develop them. For a couple facing unstable housing, waiting until their situation improves may substantially reduce the pressures surrounding a child’s early years.
There are drawbacks, however. Older parents may be supporting ageing relatives at the same time as raising children, leaving less time and energy for each responsibility. Children may also have fewer years with their grandparents. These costs deserve consideration, especially where family support is limited, but they do not automatically outweigh the benefits of a more secure upbringing.
Overall, later parenthood often results from a wish to establish suitable circumstances before having children. Although it can concentrate caring responsibilities, the opportunity to provide a stable and deliberate start to family life makes it broadly beneficial.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- All parts are addressed: reasons, advantages, disadvantages and an overall comparison. The position is conditional rather than an unsupported claim about every family.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Five paragraphs keep reasons separate from evaluation. The comparison is explicit in the final two paragraphs.
- Lexical Resource
- “Predictable working arrangements”, “caring responsibilities” and “secure upbringing” are precise, natural combinations.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Modal verbs distinguish possibilities from certainties. The phrase “These benefits are not guaranteed by age” prevents an overgeneralisation.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
10. Should advertising aimed at young children be banned?
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Practice question 73
Advertising aimed at young children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: Explain children’s limited ability to assess persuasion; consider the parental-choice objection; support a targeted ban with a clear boundary.
Model essay
Advertising can inform consumers, but messages aimed at young children often rely on attractions that the audience cannot assess critically. I therefore support banning advertising directed specifically at this group, while allowing factual product information to remain available to adults.
The central issue is an unequal relationship between advertisers and their audience. Companies can carefully design characters, rewards and repeated messages to make a product seem desirable. A young child may understand what is being offered without recognising that the message has been created to influence a purchase. When a toy is presented as essential to friendship or happiness, the child is being encouraged to judge it through an emotional promise rather than its actual qualities. The resulting pressure can also reach parents, who must repeatedly explain why an appealing product is unnecessary or unaffordable. Restricting such advertising would reduce a commercial influence that children are not yet well equipped to resist.
Opponents may argue that parents should supervise what their children watch and decide what to buy. Parental guidance is certainly important, but expecting it to neutralise every advertisement is unrealistic when commercial messages appear across games, videos and other everyday entertainment. A targeted ban would support parental choices rather than remove them: families could still research products and purchase suitable items. Its scope would need to be clear, covering promotions deliberately designed for young children instead of every advertisement a child might happen to see. Retailers could continue to describe prices, safety features and practical benefits to adult buyers, so legitimate information would remain accessible.
In conclusion, young children should not be treated as fully informed consumers. A carefully defined ban on advertising aimed at them would provide proportionate protection while preserving parents’ freedom to choose products on the basis of useful information.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The position answers the ban question directly. The counterargument is addressed without abandoning the case for protection.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The first body explains the harm; the second considers responsibility and the practical scope of the proposed ban.
- Lexical Resource
- “Commercial influence”, “parental guidance” and “fully informed consumers” express the argument without exaggerated claims.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Relative clauses specify the audience and type of promotion. Would and could distinguish proposed policy outcomes from established facts.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
11. What happens when local languages decline?
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Practice question 81
Some local languages are being used by fewer people. What problems can this cause, and what can be done to protect these languages?
Plan: Explain cultural and social costs; propose education and everyday opportunities for use rather than documentation alone.
Model essay
When a local language loses speakers, the change affects more than the vocabulary a community uses. Cultural knowledge can become harder to transmit, and relationships between generations may weaken. Protecting these languages requires opportunities to learn them and meaningful reasons to use them.
One problem is the gradual loss of knowledge embedded in everyday expression. Stories, songs and descriptions of local places may carry meanings that are difficult to preserve fully in translation. If children understand only the dominant language, older relatives can struggle to pass on these aspects of their experience. The effects are also social. A community whose language is absent from schools and public services may come to see its own traditions as less valuable. Individuals can then feel pressure to abandon part of their identity to participate in wider society. Learning a widely used language is beneficial, but this need not require losing the language spoken at home.
Effective protection should make the two compatible. Schools could introduce bilingual teaching where there is community demand, helping pupils develop wider communication skills while maintaining their local language. Teachers would need suitable materials and training; simply adding a few ceremonial lessons would offer limited support. Beyond school, libraries, broadcasters and community organisations could provide stories, programmes and activities in the language. Intergenerational projects, such as recording local history through conversations with older residents, would give younger speakers a practical purpose for using it. These measures should be developed with the people who speak the language, since an imposed programme may fail to reflect how they actually communicate.
In conclusion, declining local languages can weaken cultural transmission and community confidence. Education and public activities that support regular use offer a stronger response than preserving written records alone, while still allowing speakers to participate in a wider linguistic world.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Two linked problems are explained, and solutions address both learning and real use. The argument avoids presenting bilingualism as impossible.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The final sentence of the problem paragraph establishes the principle developed in the solution paragraph.
- Lexical Resource
- “Cultural transmission”, “intergenerational projects” and “community demand” convey distinct ideas with supporting explanations.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Conditional and relative clauses clarify when measures may work. Parallel structures organise the school and community responses.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
12. What are the benefits and risks of relying on tourism?
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Practice question 89
Many regions rely heavily on international tourism for income. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?
Plan: Develop employment and infrastructure benefits, then vulnerability and local costs; summarise both without inventing an outweigh requirement.
Model essay
International tourism can provide an important source of income for regions with limited industrial activity. Relying heavily on visitors, however, creates both opportunities and vulnerabilities. The main advantages concern employment and local investment, while the disadvantages involve economic dependence and pressure on residents.
Tourism creates demand for services that cannot all be supplied from elsewhere. Visitors need accommodation, meals, transport and guidance, allowing local residents to establish businesses or find work without moving away. A family-run guesthouse, for example, may also purchase food from nearby farms and employ local tradespeople for maintenance. Spending can therefore circulate beyond the businesses tourists directly visit. Strong visitor demand may also justify improvements to roads, public spaces and cultural attractions that residents use throughout the year. These benefits are greatest when local people own businesses and have access to the training needed for better-paid roles, rather than being confined to occasional low-paid work.
Heavy dependence nevertheless leaves a region exposed to changes it cannot control. If visitors stop arriving because of travel disruption or changing preferences, businesses may lose income simultaneously. Seasonal tourism creates a related difficulty: workers can earn well during busy months yet struggle to find employment for the rest of the year. Residents may also face higher housing costs when accommodation is more profitable as a short-term rental than as a permanent home. Meanwhile, water supplies, waste collection and other services must cope with peaks in demand. The income tourism generates can thus be accompanied by costs that fall on people who receive few of its benefits.
In conclusion, tourism can support employment, local enterprise and improved facilities, but dependence on it can produce insecurity and strain community resources. These contrasting effects show why visitor income is valuable while a diverse local economy remains desirable.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Advantages and disadvantages are both developed. The conclusion synthesises the trade-off; it does not claim the prompt required an outweigh decision.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Each body follows one economic chain and then adds a related effect. The contrast between beneficiaries and those bearing costs deepens the analysis.
- Lexical Resource
- “Seasonal tourism”, “peaks in demand” and “diverse local economy” are appropriate and supported by concrete examples.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- An if-clause explains vulnerability to a fall in visitors. Relative clauses distinguish direct businesses from other beneficiaries.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
13. Should governments fund the arts or only essential services?
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Practice question 97
Some people believe governments should fund the arts, while others think public money should be spent only on essential services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Plan: Recognise the priority of basic services; explain the public value of accessible arts; favour proportionate funding after core needs are protected.
Model essay
Public spending on the arts is often questioned when healthcare, education and other basic services need resources. These needs should take priority, but I do not believe that governments should exclude the arts from their budgets altogether. Carefully targeted cultural spending can also serve a public purpose.
The case for concentrating on essential services is strongest where basic provision is inadequate. A community without safe drinking water or a functioning clinic faces immediate harm that a new theatre cannot remedy. Governments also have limited budgets, so money allocated to one project is unavailable for another. Citizens are therefore right to question expensive cultural developments that benefit a small audience while essential facilities deteriorate. This concern does not require people to dislike art; it reflects a reasonable judgement about urgency and the government’s duty to protect fundamental living conditions before financing less pressing ambitions.
However, spending only on narrowly defined necessities would overlook the contribution of cultural participation. Public libraries, community theatres and local exhibitions can give people access to creative experiences they could not otherwise afford. A subsidised music programme, for instance, may allow children from different backgrounds to learn together and perform for their community. Such activities provide opportunities for expression and connection that a commercial market may not offer equally. The relevant choice is therefore not simply between hospitals and costly national monuments. Modest, accessible programmes can receive support alongside essential services, provided their benefits are clear and spending is transparent. Protecting existing community facilities may offer better value than constructing prestigious new buildings.
Overall, governments should secure adequate basic services first, especially where shortages are severe. Within that responsibility, proportionate funding for accessible arts can enrich public life. The priority should be demonstrable community benefit rather than either unlimited cultural expenditure or a complete withdrawal of support.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Both views are explained fairly. The opinion sets a priority and a funding condition, avoiding an unsupported demand to fund everything equally.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The second body responds to the first by distinguishing costly prestige projects from modest community programmes.
- Lexical Resource
- “Basic provision”, “cultural participation” and “proportionate funding” accurately express the argument’s distinctions.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Concessive clauses acknowledge budget constraints. Comparative structures explain why one kind of cultural spending may be preferable.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
14. Are cashless-only shops a positive development?
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Practice question 105
More shops and services are accepting only electronic payments. Is this a positive or negative development?
Plan: Acknowledge convenience, then judge compulsory exclusion negatively; distinguish offering electronic payment from removing cash.
Model essay
Electronic payments can make buying goods quick and convenient, but accepting them is different from refusing cash altogether. I consider the spread of cashless-only shops mainly negative because the efficiency gained does not justify excluding people who cannot reliably use digital payment methods.
Businesses have understandable reasons for preferring electronic transactions. Staff do not need to count change, keep substantial cash on the premises or take it to a bank. Digital records can also simplify accounting and help resolve disputes about whether a payment was made. Customers who already use cards or mobile wallets may welcome a faster checkout and the ability to review their spending later. In a busy café, for example, these advantages could make routine service smoother. They explain why electronic payment is a useful option, but not why it must become the only option. Many of the same efficiencies remain available when cash is still accepted.
The main objection is that access to digital finance is uneven. Some people lack suitable accounts or devices, while others depend on cash to manage a limited weekly budget. A customer should not become unable to purchase an ordinary necessity simply because a business has chosen a system that customer cannot use. Electronic-only transactions also depend on working networks and equipment. During an interruption, a shop may be unable to serve anyone despite having goods, staff and willing buyers. Maintaining a cash option provides resilience as well as inclusion. Where handling cash creates genuine difficulties, businesses could reduce those costs through suitable procedures instead of transferring the whole burden to excluded customers.
In conclusion, the expansion of electronic payment itself is beneficial, but making it compulsory is a different matter. A mixed system preserves convenience while protecting access and continuity, making it preferable to the complete disappearance of cash from everyday commerce.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The response evaluates “only”, the decisive word in the prompt. It distinguishes convenience from the justification for excluding cash.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The first body ends by questioning necessity; the second answers that question through inclusion and resilience.
- Lexical Resource
- “Digital records”, “continuity” and “cashless-only” have clear functions. The vocabulary remains understandable without financial expertise.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Relative and conditional clauses identify who may be excluded and when electronic systems may fail. The stance is consistent throughout.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
15. Should space funding stop until basic needs are met?
Read model 15: full essay and criterion-based feedback
Practice question 113
Governments should stop funding space exploration until all basic needs on Earth have been met. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: Prioritise urgent needs, but reject a complete indefinite halt; distinguish prestige projects from research with public value.
Model essay
It is reasonable to question spending on space exploration while people lack food, shelter or healthcare. Nevertheless, I disagree that all public funding should stop until every basic need has been met. Essential services deserve priority, but a complete halt would be an unnecessarily rigid response.
The strongest argument for reducing space budgets concerns the immediate value of alternative uses. Where a community lacks clean water, investment in reliable supplies can improve daily life directly, whereas an ambitious mission may offer benefits that are distant or uncertain. Governments should not use national prestige to excuse neglect of such needs. Large projects also require continuing expenditure on expertise and equipment, so their costs should be considered over their full lifespan rather than only at launch. Under severe financial pressure, postponing a poorly justified mission may therefore be entirely appropriate. This is a case for careful priorities, however, rather than abandoning an entire field.
Exploration programmes differ considerably in purpose and value. A mission investigating how planets formed, for example, pursues scientific understanding rather than merely demonstrating national power. Designing equipment for extreme conditions may also produce technical knowledge with applications beyond the original mission, although such benefits should not be assumed automatically. More fundamentally, requiring every basic need to be met first sets a condition that may never be permanently satisfied: populations change and new problems emerge. Governments routinely balance urgent services with longer-term investment in knowledge. They can apply the same principle here by supporting projects with clear objectives, sharing costs internationally and rejecting proposals whose expected value does not justify their expense.
In conclusion, basic needs should carry greater weight than prestige-driven space projects, especially where resources are scarce. Yet proportionate investment in well-justified research can coexist with that priority. Decisions should depend on purpose, cost and likely public benefit rather than a blanket prohibition.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The answer directly rejects the absolute condition while recognising its moral concern. It distinguishes different projects instead of defending every programme.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The first body establishes an allocation principle; the second explains why that principle does not imply a total ban.
- Lexical Resource
- “Full lifespan”, “technical capabilities” and “blanket prohibition” are used precisely and naturally.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Where-clauses and although-clauses add necessary conditions. A colon introduces the explanation of why the proposed condition is problematic.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
16. Should museums prioritise original objects or interactive technology?
Read model 16: full essay and criterion-based feedback
Practice question 121
Some people think museums should focus on original objects, while others believe interactive technology is the best way to engage visitors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Plan: Explain the evidential value of objects and the accessibility of technology; favour technology that helps visitors understand the collection.
Model essay
Museums must preserve important material while helping visitors understand why it matters. Original objects and interactive technology can both contribute to this purpose. I believe collections should remain central, with technology used selectively to make their meaning more accessible.
Original objects offer a direct connection with the past that a digital reconstruction cannot fully reproduce. The worn handle of a tool, the repairs to a garment or the scale of a sculpture can reveal how something was made and used. Visitors encounter evidence rather than only an interpretation prepared for them. Collections also support research because future investigators may ask questions that earlier curators did not anticipate. A museum that neglects its objects in favour of changing digital attractions risks losing this distinctive role. Preserving, studying and displaying authentic material should therefore remain a fundamental responsibility, even when that work is less immediately spectacular than a screen-based experience.
Interactive technology is valuable when it helps people engage with this evidence. A fragile manuscript cannot be handled by every visitor, but a digital version can allow readers to enlarge details, turn pages and compare a translation. Audio and visual explanations can also support people who find a dense written label difficult to use. The strongest applications therefore remove barriers to understanding rather than compete with the collection for attention. Problems arise when interactive features become entertainment with little connection to the material on display. Visitors may remember pressing buttons yet leave with no clearer understanding of the objects or the people associated with them. Careful design should keep the educational purpose visible.
In conclusion, museums should build their identity around original collections while using technology to improve access and interpretation. The best balance is achieved when a digital experience makes visitors look more closely at an object, rather than giving them a reason to ignore it.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Both approaches receive specific support. The opinion explains how they can work together and gives a criterion for judging technology.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The manuscript example answers the limitations of access implied by the first body. The conclusion returns to the museum’s purpose.
- Lexical Resource
- “Digital reconstruction”, “authentic material” and “interpretation” are appropriate, with concrete examples making the distinctions clear.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- A range of relative clauses adds information economically. The repeated contrast between evidence and interpretation supports, rather than obscures, meaning.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
17. Should community sport take priority over elite athletes?
Read model 17: full essay and criterion-based feedback
Practice question 129
Governments should prioritise community sports facilities over funding elite athletes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: Support priority for accessible facilities; consider inspiration from elite sport; explain why opportunities to participate produce wider direct benefits.
Model essay
Governments face a choice between supporting exceptional athletes and making physical activity accessible to the wider population. Although elite sport has value, I agree that community facilities should receive priority because their benefits are more direct and widely shared.
Accessible local facilities allow people to make exercise part of ordinary life. A reasonably priced swimming pool, a well-maintained playing field or a safe indoor sports hall can serve children, working adults and older residents. Their value is not limited to producing future champions. They also provide places where neighbours meet, beginners gain confidence and people with different abilities participate. For a family unable to afford a private club, a public facility may be the only realistic opportunity for regular sport. Funding should therefore include suitable opening hours, affordable fees and trained staff, since a building alone does not guarantee access. This practical support can benefit residents repeatedly over many years.
Supporters of elite funding reasonably argue that successful athletes inspire others and give a country a sense of achievement. High-level programmes may also develop coaching expertise that can later assist local sport. Yet inspiration does not automatically become participation. A child who watches a champion swimmer still needs a nearby pool, lessons and time to practise. If those opportunities are absent, medals may generate enthusiasm without changing everyday activity. Elite programmes can also concentrate substantial resources on relatively few people. Public support for them is easier to justify when it complements a strong community system, shares expertise and leaves facilities that ordinary residents can use, rather than drawing resources away from basic provision.
In conclusion, governments should protect broad access to community sport before expanding elite programmes. Champions can motivate people, but accessible facilities turn that motivation into action. Prioritising participation therefore offers a stronger foundation for both public wellbeing and future sporting achievement.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The opinion is clearly about priority, not banning elite funding. The counterargument is answered through the gap between inspiration and participation.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- A child’s need for a pool links elite success back to the community facilities discussed earlier.
- Lexical Resource
- “Basic provision”, “coaching expertise” and “regular sport” are accurate combinations. The argument uses specific facilities rather than vague references to development.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Conditional structures explain when elite spending is justified. Parallel noun phrases organise the examples of accessible facilities.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
18. Why is more food imported, and is this beneficial?
Read model 18: full essay and criterion-based feedback
Practice question 137
Supermarkets sell more food imported from other countries than they did in the past. Why is this happening, and is it a positive or negative development?
Plan: Explain consumer demand and trade capacity; judge the change broadly positive for choice and supply, with environmental and resilience qualifications.
Model essay
Supermarkets increasingly source food from other countries because consumers want greater variety and international supply networks make that demand easier to meet. I regard this as broadly positive, provided imports complement local production rather than create avoidable dependence or environmental costs.
Consumer expectations are an important driver. Shoppers may want fruit outside its local growing season or ingredients associated with cuisines from elsewhere. Retailers have a commercial incentive to meet these preferences, especially when competitors already offer a wide selection. Improvements in storage, transport and coordination also allow food to travel while remaining suitable for sale. In addition, production conditions differ: a crop that is difficult to grow locally may be produced efficiently in another climate. Importing it can therefore be more practical than attempting to supply every item domestically. The trend reflects both what shoppers ask for and what suppliers are able to provide.
The main benefit is a more varied and potentially more dependable food supply. When a local harvest is poor, goods from other regions can help fill the gap. Access to unfamiliar ingredients also allows consumers to prepare a wider range of meals. However, dependence on distant suppliers can become a weakness when transport is disrupted or a small number of sources dominate the market. Environmental effects also require attention, although distance alone does not reveal the full impact: production methods, storage and the type of transport all matter. Supermarkets should therefore maintain diverse sources, provide clear information and avoid treating local suppliers as unnecessary simply because imported products are available.
Overall, growing food imports reflect stronger demand for variety and greater capacity to trade. They are beneficial when they expand choice and support supply, but the strongest system combines international trade with viable local farming. Neither complete self-sufficiency nor unrestricted dependence offers an equally practical answer in every situation.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The answer covers both why imports increase and whether the change is positive. The evaluation gives benefits, limitations and a clear final judgement.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Causes occupy one body; evaluation occupies the other. The conclusion combines the two answers without adding a new argument.
- Lexical Resource
- “Local growing season”, “diverse sources” and “self-sufficiency” are precise and relevant to food trade.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Comparative and conditional structures avoid absolute claims about local or imported food. The colon introduces a useful explanatory list.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
19. Should habitats take priority over individual endangered species?
Read model 19: full essay and criterion-based feedback
Practice question 145
Protecting natural habitats should be a higher priority than protecting individual endangered species. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Plan: Agree mainly because habitats support many connected species; allow targeted rescue where immediate extinction risk requires it.
Model essay
Conservation resources are limited, so deciding how to use them requires attention to both immediate risks and wider ecological effects. I largely agree that protecting habitats should take priority over focusing on individual endangered species, although targeted rescue remains necessary in some circumstances.
Habitat protection addresses several threats at their source. Animals and plants depend on places that provide food, shelter and suitable conditions for reproduction. Protecting a wetland, for example, can support birds, fish, insects and vegetation together, including species that attract little public attention. It also preserves relationships between them, such as the movement of nutrients and the availability of food. By contrast, increasing the numbers of one species may achieve little if the place to which it must return continues to deteriorate. A breeding programme cannot by itself restore a polluted river or prevent the destruction of nesting sites. Protecting the underlying environment therefore offers a broader and often more durable use of conservation resources.
However, habitat conservation does not make every species-specific intervention unnecessary. A population may already be so small that it cannot recover without additional support, even after its surroundings improve. In that situation, temporary breeding, monitoring or protection from a particular threat may prevent an irreversible loss. The important question is whether the intervention forms part of a credible recovery plan. Supporting an endangered species should include attention to the conditions it needs to survive independently, rather than maintaining a permanent rescue effort while ignoring the original cause of decline. This approach makes targeted action a complement to habitat protection instead of a competing objective in every case.
In conclusion, habitats deserve the main share of attention because they sustain whole ecological communities and address fundamental causes of decline. Individual species may still need urgent assistance, but that assistance is most valuable when linked to the protection of a viable natural home.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- The answer evaluates priority and preserves a defensible exception. It explains why habitat protection can have wider effects rather than merely asserting that it is important.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The wetland example develops the main principle; the second body defines the circumstances where that principle needs additional support.
- Lexical Resource
- “Ecological communities”, “reproduction” and “credible recovery plan” are used naturally with clear explanations.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Even-after and if-clauses convey the distinction between a necessary condition and a sufficient response. Sentence lengths vary without losing control.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
20. What are the advantages and disadvantages of compulsory volunteering?
Read model 20: full essay and criterion-based feedback
Practice question 153
Some schools require students to complete unpaid community service before graduation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this requirement?
Plan: Explain exposure to community needs and practical learning; evaluate motivation, unequal burdens and supervision costs.
Model essay
Requiring students to complete unpaid community service can connect education with life outside the classroom. The policy offers opportunities for practical learning and wider social awareness, but it also creates difficulties when participation is compulsory and students have unequal amounts of free time.
A major advantage is that students encounter needs they might otherwise overlook. Helping at a community centre, for example, can show how local services support people of different ages and circumstances. This experience may challenge assumptions more effectively than a classroom discussion because students see the work directly and contribute to it. They can also practise useful skills such as communicating with unfamiliar people, arriving reliably and cooperating on shared tasks. Compulsory participation ensures that these opportunities reach students who would not initially volunteer on their own. Some may discover an activity they value and choose to continue after the required period has ended.
The main disadvantage is that a requirement can shift attention from meaningful contribution to simply completing a set number of hours. An unwilling or poorly prepared student may need substantial supervision, placing an extra burden on the organisation that is supposed to benefit. The policy can also affect students unequally. A teenager who already works to support the family or cares for a relative has less spare time than a classmate with few responsibilities. If schools ignore this difference, the requirement may penalise existing contributions that are less visible. Suitable placements, preparation and recognition of genuine caring commitments can reduce these problems, but they require careful organisation rather than merely announcing a target.
In conclusion, compulsory community service can broaden students’ understanding and develop practical responsibility. Its disadvantages concern motivation, fairness and the demands placed on host organisations. The educational value depends on whether schools create useful, accessible experiences instead of treating the completion of hours as an achievement in itself.
Feedback: how the answer works
- Task Response
- Advantages and disadvantages are explained with specific mechanisms. The conclusion offers a balanced synthesis without claiming a judgement the question did not explicitly request.
- Coherence and Cohesion
- The advantages move from awareness to skills; the disadvantages move from motivation to fairness and implementation.
- Lexical Resource
- “Genuine caring commitments”, “host organisations” and “meaningful contribution” provide precise alternatives to repeated use of “help”.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Relative clauses identify affected students; conditional sentences explain the consequences of ignoring their circumstances.
Instructional feedback, not an official score. In your own answer, reassess the reasoning whenever the wording of the question changes.
Understand the instruction
IELTS Task 2 essay types and useful structures
These categories help you plan, but the question itself is the authority. A prompt can combine patterns. Before choosing a structure, identify the subject, any limiting words and every task you must complete.
| Instruction pattern | What to do | Possible body structure | Avoid |
|---|---|---|---|
| Opinion: agree or disagree | State how far you agree and justify that position. | Reason one → reason two; or main argument → qualified response to an objection. | A conclusion that contradicts your introduction. |
| Discuss both views and give your opinion | Explain why each view is held and make your judgement clear. | View one → view two with your evaluation. | Explaining only the view you support. |
| Advantages and disadvantages | Develop meaningful benefits and drawbacks. | Advantages → disadvantages. | Assuming the task necessarily asks which side outweighs the other. |
| Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? | Discuss both and explicitly compare their importance. | Weaker side → stronger side with reasons for the comparison. | Counting arguments instead of evaluating their significance. |
| Causes and solutions | Explain why the problem occurs and how it can be reduced. | Causes → measures matched to those causes. | Calling a consequence a cause. |
| Problems and solutions | Explain the difficulties a situation creates and practical responses. | Problems → solutions linked to those problems. | Writing only about why the situation began. |
| Causes and effects | Explain drivers and consequences for the groups named. | Causes → effects. | Spending a body paragraph on unrequested solutions. |
| Positive or negative development | Give an overall evaluation, supported by relevant consequences. | Main effects supporting your judgement → limitations and evaluation. | Listing both sides without a clear final judgement. |
| Two-part or mixed question | Answer every question and any additional evaluative instruction. | Question one → question two; add a body paragraph when the second task needs comparison. | Giving one part only a sentence in the conclusion. |
For a closer comparison, read agree-or-disagree versus discuss-both-views essays.
One topic, three different tasks
Topic: working from home.
Opinion: should employers allow it? Decide what policy you support and why.
Outweigh: do its benefits exceed its drawbacks? Compare the significance of both.
Causes and effects: why has it increased, and what results? Explain the trend without replacing the task with a policy debate.
Know the target
What a Band 9-target essay needs to demonstrate
The four criteria have equal weight within Task 2. High-level vocabulary cannot compensate automatically for an incomplete answer. Read the official Writing band descriptors (PDF) alongside your own work.
Task Response
Explore the question thoroughly. Maintain a clear, fully developed position and support relevant ideas with sufficient detail.
Ask: have I answered every instruction and explained why my main claims hold?
Coherence and Cohesion
Make the argument effortless to follow. Organise paragraphs skilfully and connect ideas naturally.
Ask: can a reader follow the reasoning without having to guess how points connect?
Lexical Resource
Use a broad vocabulary precisely, appropriately and naturally. At this level, spelling and word-formation lapses are extremely rare.
Ask: are my word choices accurate, or merely ambitious?
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Control a wide range of structures with flexibility. Grammar and punctuation should remain consistently accurate, with only extremely rare minor errors.
Ask: do my sentences express the intended relationships clearly?
Criteria summarised from the official descriptors; review questions are practice prompts.
From question to essay
A practical 40-minute writing method
Read and plan
Identify the task, choose your position, assign each body paragraph a purpose and select supporting examples.
Write and develop
Introduce the answer, build the argument in connected paragraphs and finish with a clear conclusion.
Check and refine
Check task coverage and consistency, then correct sentence boundaries, agreement, articles, spelling and unclear words.
This timing split is a flexible practice method. Adjust it using evidence from your timed essays.
Build a paragraph that explains rather than repeats
A useful thinking sequence is claim → explanation → illustration → connection to the question. It is a reasoning aid, not a compulsory four-sentence formula.
Claim: Reliable public transport can widen access to employment.
Explanation: People without a car can consider jobs beyond walking distance when services connect residential areas with workplaces.
Illustration: A shift worker may be able to accept an early hospital job if buses begin before the shift starts.
Connection: Spending on service frequency can therefore improve opportunity, particularly for workers whose choices are restricted by transport.
Notice that the example demonstrates the claim. It does not introduce a fake study or repeat that public transport is “very important”.
Write a clear introduction
For the question about community sport, an effective opening identifies the spending choice and takes a position:
Governments face a choice between supporting exceptional athletes and making physical activity accessible to the wider population. Although elite sport has value, I agree that community facilities should receive priority because their benefits are more direct and widely shared.
The first sentence narrows the subject. The second gives a qualified opinion and a reason the essay can develop. There is no need for a memorised historical opening.
Finish with a conclusion that answers the question
Return to your judgement and its strongest basis. For an outweigh question, make the comparison visible. For a two-part question, briefly bring both answers together. Do not add an undeveloped argument at the end.
Useful conclusion pattern: “Overall, [direct answer]. Although [main limitation], [reason your judgement remains justified].”
Use this to understand the function of a conclusion. Write the wording afresh for each prompt.
Make every sentence useful
Vocabulary, linking language and grammar in context
Learn language for the work it performs in an argument. You do not need to insert every expression below into one essay. Choose the form that matches the relationship between your ideas.
| Purpose | Example | Why it works |
|---|---|---|
| Give a direct position | I largely agree that habitat protection should take priority, although some species require urgent individual support. | States the degree of agreement and its boundary. |
| Explain a cause | Because repairs can cost almost as much as replacement, households may discard appliances with minor faults. | Connects a decision to a reason. |
| Show a consequence | This shortage can push workers further from their jobs, increasing both travel time and transport costs. | The reference “this shortage” is specific. |
| Introduce an illustration | A parent on an early shift, for example, may be unable to use childcare that opens after work begins. | Shows exactly how a barrier operates. |
| Acknowledge a limitation | Although online courses remove travel barriers, they still require suitable equipment and independent study skills. | Qualifies a benefit without denying it. |
| Make a comparison | The daily savings in travel time are more substantial than the occasional inconvenience of arranging an online meeting. | Explains why one effect matters more. |
| Set a condition | If the city removes fares without funding additional services, overcrowding may reduce the benefit. | Links policy design to a possible outcome. |
| Offer a measured claim | Flexible hours can help some carers remain in employment, especially when their responsibilities vary from day to day. | Avoids assuming that all workers benefit equally. |
Improve common errors
| Problem | Improved version | Lesson |
|---|---|---|
| Public transport reduce pollution. | Public transport reduces pollution. | Check subject–verb agreement. |
| Many informations are available. | A great deal of information is available. | “Information” is uncountable in this meaning. |
| Governments should invest more money on education. | Governments should invest more money in education. | Use the correct preposition in the pattern “invest in”. |
| Costs are rising, families are moving away. | Costs are rising, so some families are moving away. | Repair the comma splice and state the relationship. |
| Although online learning is convenient, but it requires discipline. | Although online learning is convenient, it requires discipline. | Do not use “although” and “but” to introduce the same contrast. |
| Technology is very good for everyone. | Accessible learning software can help pupils practise at a suitable pace. | Replace a sweeping claim with a specific mechanism. |
| People can do a decision. | People can make a decision. | Learn accurate word combinations. |
| If governments will improve bus routes, more people will use them. | If governments improve bus routes, more people may use them. | Use the appropriate conditional form and avoid guaranteeing behaviour. |
Build reliable habits
40 practical IELTS Writing Task 2 tips
Use these tips as habits to practise, not a checklist of features to force into every essay. Strong performance comes from meeting the question’s demands with clear reasoning and controlled language.
Read and plan accurately
Read tips 1–8: read and plan accurately
- Find the precise subject.
Underline who or what is being discussed. A question about secondary-school teachers is narrower than a question about education in general.
- Circle the limiting words.
Notice all, only, mainly, young, public and local. These words can change a reasonable position into an extreme one you need to qualify.
- List every instruction.
Separate reasons, effects, solutions and opinions. A response can be fluent yet incomplete if it answers only the first part.
- Write a one-sentence answer.
Before drafting, state exactly what you think or what your two answers are. This becomes a test for the relevance of later paragraphs.
- Choose explainable ideas.
Prefer a clear point you can support to a sophisticated claim you cannot develop. Two strong arguments usually beat a catalogue of weak ones.
- Assign a job to each body paragraph.
Write a short label such as “cause: repair is expensive” or “view two: employment skills”. Avoid two paragraphs that make the same point.
- Choose examples before drafting.
Select a brief, plausible illustration that demonstrates the mechanism. Do not plan invented studies or impressive-looking percentages.
- Budget time for checking.
Try a five-minute plan, 30-minute draft and five-minute review, then adjust after timed practice. Treat this as a flexible method, not a rule.
Develop a convincing answer
Read tips 9–16: develop a convincing answer
- Explain why the claim is true.
After a topic sentence, ask “Why?” A causal explanation gives the reader something stronger than repeated agreement.
- Show the consequence.
Connect the mechanism to an outcome that matters to the question. Less commuting can mean more time, but explain how that time benefits people.
- Keep examples proportionate.
Use enough detail to illustrate the point, then return to the argument. A long personal story can take over a paragraph.
- Make comparisons explicit.
In an outweigh essay, compare severity, duration or reach. Counting points is not a meaningful way to decide which side is stronger.
- Match solutions to causes.
If the cause is unavailable spare parts, a repairability requirement is relevant. A generic awareness campaign does not remove that barrier.
- Identify the responsible actor.
Say whether schools, employers, families or governments should act. Explain what they can realistically change.
- Use qualifications where needed.
Words such as can, often and in some circumstances prevent sweeping claims. Do not weaken a well-supported position with uncertainty in every sentence.
- Address counterarguments fairly.
Explain why a reasonable person might hold the other view before responding. Do not replace it with a weaker claim that is easier to dismiss.
Make the argument easy to follow
Read tips 17–24: make the argument easy to follow
- Start paragraphs with direction.
A topic sentence should identify a reason or perspective, not announce that the topic has many aspects.
- Order ideas logically.
Move from cause to result, principle to example, or objection to response. Choose the order that makes your reasoning easiest to understand.
- Use clear references.
After writing this, these or it, check that the noun is obvious. “This cost” can be clearer than an unexplained “This”.
- Choose connectors by meaning.
Use however for a genuine contrast, therefore for a supported result and for example for an illustration. They are not interchangeable decorations.
- Avoid connector overload.
Do not begin every sentence with a linking phrase. Logical order and repeated key terms can connect sentences more naturally.
- Keep paragraphs purposeful.
Add a new paragraph when the main function changes. Do not break one developed idea into several tiny paragraphs for appearance.
- Maintain a visible position.
Your examples and qualifications should support the stance you announced. If a body paragraph appears to contradict it, explain the boundary.
- Conclude the actual question.
Answer the prompt directly and bring the reasons together. Avoid a vague final sentence such as “Everyone should work together” unless that is your argued answer.
Use accurate, flexible language
Read tips 25–32: use accurate, flexible language
- Learn vocabulary in combinations.
Record phrases such as “meet basic needs” and “allocate public funds”, with your own sentence showing their meaning.
- Prefer precision to length.
Use “rising rents” instead of a vague phrase such as “the negative economic situation of accommodation” when that is what you mean.
- Paraphrase meaning, not individual words.
Change sentence structure while preserving the question’s scope. Essential topic terms can remain unchanged.
- Use complex grammar for a purpose.
A conditional sentence can test a policy; a relative clause can identify a group; an although-clause can acknowledge a limitation.
- Mix shorter and longer sentences.
A short sentence can state a judgement clearly after a complex explanation. Do not turn every paragraph into one long sentence.
- Check recurring small errors.
Articles, plurals and verb agreement can recur throughout otherwise strong writing. Keep a personal list and practise corrected patterns.
- Control sentence boundaries.
Join complete clauses with suitable punctuation and conjunctions. Avoid linking two sentences with only a comma.
- Protect clarity during editing.
Do not replace a familiar correct word with an uncertain synonym at the last moment. Make edits that improve meaning or accuracy.
Practise and review effectively
Read tips 33–40: practise and review effectively
- Plan across different topics.
Short planning drills build flexibility. Try the same topic with opinion, discussion and causes-and-solutions instructions.
- Write under realistic conditions.
Practise within the time and without language assistance. Use the test format you plan to take.
- Review all four criteria.
Check task coverage and organisation before focusing on individual words. A polished sentence cannot repair a missing answer.
- Rewrite after feedback.
Improve the weakest paragraph while the problem is clear. Revision turns feedback into a skill rather than a forgotten comment.
- Keep an error-and-action log.
Record the error, a corrected sentence and what to check next time. Group repeated problems instead of collecting unrelated corrections.
- Read models actively.
Identify the thesis, the purpose of each paragraph and how examples support claims. Close the model and apply one technique to a fresh prompt.
- Practise the whole Writing test.
Include Task 1 as well as Task 2 so your timing reflects the real workload. Finishing a Task 2 essay alone is only part of preparation.
- Track evidence of progress.
Compare recent timed work for clearer answers, better development and fewer repeated errors. Treat one estimated band as a limited snapshot.
Improve the next draft
A self-review checklist and seven-day practice plan
Use these questions after a timed response. They guide revision; they are not a calculator that can assign an official band score.
Check the answer
- Have I answered every instruction?
- Have I preserved the prompt’s limits?
- Is my position clear and consistent?
- Does each main idea have enough support?
Check the argument
- Does each body paragraph have a clear purpose?
- Can I explain how each sentence connects?
- Are examples relevant and proportionate?
- Does the conclusion follow from the bodies?
Check the language
- Are word choices and collocations accurate?
- Are pronoun references clear?
- Are sentence boundaries and verb forms controlled?
- Have I corrected recurring spelling and article errors?
Choose the next action
- Which missing explanation matters most?
- Which paragraph should I rewrite?
- Which two language patterns need practice?
- What will I check in the next timed essay?
| Day | Practice | Output to keep |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Analyse six prompts from three topics. Label each instruction and write a direct answer. | Six short plans. |
| 2 | Write an opinion essay in 40 minutes. Review task coverage before language. | One essay and two revision priorities. |
| 3 | Study the closest model, then rewrite your weakest paragraph without copying. | A revised paragraph and an error log. |
| 4 | Plan a discussion essay and an outweigh essay on different topics. | Two plans with explicit positions. |
| 5 | Write a mixed or two-part question under timed conditions. | One essay checked against every instruction. |
| 6 | Practise five recurring grammar or collocation problems using new sentences. | Corrected patterns you can reuse naturally. |
| 7 | Complete a full 60-minute Writing practice including Task 1, then review your timing. | A timing record and next week’s priorities. |
A useful feedback record
For each essay, record the question, date, position, one strength, one weak explanation, two recurring language issues and the revision you made. Progress becomes easier to see when you compare specific features of several essays, rather than relying only on estimated bands.
Answers to common questions
IELTS Writing Task 2 FAQs
Find answers about word count, essay structure, opinions, examples, vocabulary, marking and preparation. Official requirements are grounded in the sources below; study routines and writing techniques are practical guidance.
- Test format and requirements
- Word count and presentation
- Question types and positions
- Ideas, evidence and examples
- Paragraphs, introductions and conclusions
- Vocabulary and grammar
- Coherence and exam strategy
- Scores, feedback and model essays
- Preparation and common misconceptions
Test format and requirements
What is IELTS Writing Task 2?
It is an essay responding to a point of view, argument or problem. Your job is to answer the exact instructions, develop relevant ideas and organise them into connected paragraphs. Both Academic and General Training include this task.
How many words should I write?
Write at least 250 words. For practice, around 280–320 words can leave room for developed ideas and a conclusion without encouraging unnecessary length. This range is a study suggestion, not an official upper limit or a scoring rule.
How much time should I spend on Task 2?
Plan to spend about 40 minutes of the 60-minute Writing test on Task 2. A useful practice split is five minutes to analyse and plan, 30 minutes to write and five minutes to check. Adjust this split to your writing speed.
How much does Task 2 count towards my Writing score?
Task 2 carries twice the weight of Task 1. Both tasks still matter and must be completed. A strong Task 2 essay does not remove the need to answer Task 1 properly.
Is Task 2 the same in Academic and General Training?
Both require an essay of at least 250 words and use the same four Task 2 assessment criteria. Prompts can differ, so practise the appropriate test materials. The argument development and language skills taught here are useful for both.
Should General Training Task 2 be informal?
Use a semi-formal or neutral discursive style. General Training Task 2 is still an essay, even though General Training Task 1 may ask for an informal letter. Avoid text-message language and an excessively conversational tone.
Can I write Task 2 before Task 1?
You can choose how to allocate your Writing time, but you must complete both tasks within the test period. Practise your preferred order in a full timed Writing session so that neither task is rushed.
Can I answer with bullet points, headings or a list?
The exam response should be a connected essay in full sentences and paragraphs. Use lists in your planning notes if helpful, but turn those notes into developed prose in the answer. The headings on this study page are teaching aids, not an exam format.
Word count and presentation
What happens if I write fewer than 250 words?
You will not meet the stated minimum, and a short response may leave ideas underdeveloped or provide too little evidence of your language ability. Do not rely on an automatic “minus one band” rule; the published descriptors do not provide one universal deduction to apply to every short essay.
Is there a maximum word limit?
IELTS specifies a minimum of 250 words for Task 2, not a fixed upper limit. A longer essay is not automatically better. Extra length can reduce checking time and introduce repetition or irrelevant material.
Will writing 350 or 400 words give me a higher band?
No. Length alone does not demonstrate stronger argument, vocabulary or grammar. If your ideas are fully developed in a shorter essay, extra sentences may add little. Prioritise a complete response you can check within the time.
Do I need to add a title to my exam essay?
No title is needed. Start with your introduction and use the available time for answering the question. The essay titles on this page help readers browse the resource; they are not part of the model essay word counts.
How many paragraphs should I use?
There is no fixed paragraph count that guarantees a score. Four paragraphs often work for an introduction, two developed bodies and a conclusion. Five can work well when a mixed question needs separate treatment of reasons, benefits and drawbacks.
How long should my introduction be?
Usually two or three purposeful sentences are enough for a practice essay: introduce the specific issue and give the position or main answers the question requires. Do not spend a large part of the essay on general background.
How long should my conclusion be?
One or two developed sentences can be enough if they clearly answer the question and synthesise your reasoning. Use more only when needed for clarity. Avoid introducing a new cause, example or policy at this stage.
Does copying the question help my word count?
Do not copy the prompt to increase length. Restate its central issue accurately in your own sentence, keeping necessary technical or topic words. Your answer should demonstrate your own language and reasoning, rather than reproduce the task.
Question types and positions
How many IELTS Task 2 essay types are there?
Teachers group prompts into categories such as opinion, discussion, advantages and disadvantages, problems and solutions, and two-part questions. These are useful teaching labels, not a closed list of every possible instruction. Always read the actual wording, including mixed tasks.
What is the difference between an opinion essay and a discussion essay?
An opinion question asks you to judge a statement. A discuss-both-views question asks you to explain each given perspective and, when requested, give your own judgement. An opinion essay can mention an opposing view, but that does not make its purpose a balanced discussion.
Can I partly agree with a statement?
Yes, if the limits of your agreement are clear. For example, you might support community service for suitable offences while rejecting its use for every non-violent offence. Explain the distinction throughout instead of saying only that both sides have merits.
Must I discuss both sides in an agree-or-disagree essay?
You must justify your position on the statement. An opposing argument may help you explain a qualification or strengthen your reasoning, but equal treatment of both sides is not automatically required. Follow the instruction rather than a memorised rule.
What does “outweigh” mean?
It asks whether one side is more important, serious or beneficial than the other. Discuss both sides and explain your comparison. Two advantages do not automatically outweigh one disadvantage; consider impact, duration, reach and whether the drawbacks can be reduced.
How is “advantages and disadvantages” different from “outweigh”?
An advantages-and-disadvantages question asks you to explore both sides. An outweigh question additionally requires a clear comparative judgement. Do not assume that every benefits-and-drawbacks prompt is asking which side wins.
How should I answer a positive-or-negative-development question?
Give an overall evaluation and support it with consequences of the development. You can acknowledge disadvantages while judging it mainly positive, or vice versa. Make the final judgement clear rather than leaving the reader to infer it.
How should I organise a two-part or mixed question?
Identify every instruction before writing. One body paragraph per question can work, but a prompt asking reasons and an outweigh judgement may need three bodies: reasons, benefits and drawbacks with comparison. Choose a structure that gives every requirement enough development.
Ideas, evidence and examples
Do I need specialist knowledge of the topic?
No. Task 2 is a language and argument-writing task, not a specialist knowledge test. Use understandable reasoning and relevant examples from general knowledge or experience. If a topic is unfamiliar, begin with the people affected, the likely causes and the practical consequences.
What should I do if I cannot think of ideas?
Ask four questions: Who is affected? What changes for them? Why does that happen? What is a realistic example? Compare individuals, employers, communities and governments where relevant. Choose two ideas you can explain well rather than searching for an impressive theory.
How many main ideas do I need?
There is no required number. Two well-developed main ideas often work in a standard essay, but the number must suit the question. A mixed task may require more distinct points. Development matters more than listing as many arguments as possible.
What counts as developing an idea?
Explain the mechanism behind your claim, show what it leads to and support it with a relevant illustration or detail. For example, “free transport helps people” becomes stronger when you explain how fares can prevent a low-income resident from attending training.
Must every body paragraph contain an example?
Each main idea needs support, but a rigid one-example-per-paragraph rule is not necessary. Detailed explanation, a comparison or a concrete scenario may provide effective support. Include an example when it clarifies the reasoning rather than merely occupying space.
Can I use personal examples?
Relevant examples may come from your own knowledge or experience. Keep them concise and connect them to the wider argument. A long story about one relative or friend can distract from the question if you do not explain what it illustrates.
Can I invent statistics or research?
Avoid fabricated percentages, surveys and named studies. They rarely improve an argument and can make it less credible. A clearly framed illustration, such as what a family might do when rent rises, can support a point without pretending to be research.
Can I use examples from Pakistan or my own country?
Yes, when they fit the question and make sense to a reader unfamiliar with the setting. Explain the relevant feature instead of relying on a local name alone. Do not assume one local example proves that the same situation exists everywhere.
Paragraphs, introductions and conclusions
What should an introduction do?
Identify the specific issue and establish the answer you will develop. If an opinion is requested, make your position visible. If two questions are asked, signal both answers. Avoid opening with broad claims about the whole history of humanity.
Do I need “This essay will discuss…”?
No. It is not a required phrase. A direct thesis usually tells the reader more, such as “Public transport should receive priority because it moves more people within limited urban space.” Use an outline only when it genuinely clarifies a complex response.
How can I paraphrase without changing the meaning?
Restate the idea using a different sentence structure and accurate vocabulary. Preserve key limits such as “children”, “public money”, “only” or “in cities”. It is better to repeat an essential term than replace it with a word that means something different.
What is a topic sentence?
It introduces the main point of a paragraph and shows how that point answers the question. “One obstacle is the cost of childcare” is more useful than “There are many problems”, because it gives the reader a clear direction.
Should all body paragraphs have the same length?
No. Give each required part enough attention for the argument to be clear. Large imbalances can signal an underdeveloped view, but equal word counts are unnecessary. A more complex point may reasonably need more explanation.
Can I change my opinion in the conclusion?
Your conclusion should match the position developed in the essay. If your thinking changes while planning, revise the thesis and bodies so the final response is consistent. A sudden reversal in the last sentence leaves the reasoning unclear.
Can I give a new example in the conclusion?
It is usually better to place evidence in the body, where you can explain it. Use the conclusion to bring your answer together. A new example or argument can feel unfinished because there is no space left to develop it.
How can I avoid repeating myself?
Check whether each sentence adds a reason, mechanism, illustration, qualification or consequence. Changing “important” to “essential” does not create a new idea. In the conclusion, synthesise your reasoning rather than restating every body sentence.
Vocabulary and grammar
Do I need difficult words for Band 9?
You need precise, flexible and natural vocabulary. A less common word is helpful when it expresses the intended meaning better; it is harmful when used inaccurately. Learn combinations such as “affordable housing” and “reliable transport”, not isolated impressive words.
Should I use idioms and proverbs?
Avoid forcing conversational idioms, clichés or proverbs into an academic-style essay. Natural topic vocabulary and accurate collocations are more useful. “Reduce pressure on public services” communicates more clearly than a decorative saying unrelated to the point.
Can I use “I” and “my opinion”?
Yes. First-person language can clearly express a requested position. Use it purposefully rather than beginning every sentence with “I think”. An opinion still needs reasons; personal certainty is not a substitute for explanation.
Should I use British or American spelling?
Either can be used. Choose a consistent style for practice and pay close attention to spelling accuracy. Do not waste exam time trying to convert familiar correct words into a variety you use less confidently.
How many complex sentences should I write?
There is no useful fixed quota. Use subordinate, relative and conditional clauses where they clarify relationships between ideas. Combine these with controlled shorter sentences. An excessively long sentence with unclear grammar is not evidence of greater skill.
Must I use every tense, the passive voice or inversion?
No. Select structures that fit your meaning. Present forms often explain general situations; past forms may support a relevant example; conditional forms can explore outcomes. Forced grammar can distort your point and introduce errors.
Is it bad to repeat a topic word?
Not necessarily. Repeating “teachers” or “public transport” can preserve precision. Use pronouns, related terms and restructuring where they remain clear, but do not replace an exact term with a misleading synonym simply to avoid repetition.
What language errors should I check first?
Start with errors that affect meaning: missing verbs, unclear references and broken sentence boundaries. Then check subject–verb agreement, articles, singular and plural forms, word choice, spelling and punctuation. Use your own error log to identify recurring priorities.
Coherence and exam strategy
How many linking words should I use?
There is no target number. Make relationships clear through logical order, topic sentences, reference words and appropriate connectors. Starting every sentence with “Moreover” or “Furthermore” can make an essay mechanical and hide weak development.
What is the difference between coherence and cohesion?
Coherence concerns how easily the argument makes sense as a whole. Cohesion concerns the language connections between ideas, such as pronouns, repeated key terms and linking expressions. Adding connectors cannot repair an argument whose ideas do not logically follow.
How can I manage my time better?
Practise with a visible timer and a short planning routine. Decide your position and paragraph purposes before drafting. If you regularly run over time, reduce the number of main ideas and cut repetitive introductions rather than eliminating all planning.
What should I do if I am running out of time?
Complete the current argument clearly and write a concise conclusion that answers the question. Avoid starting a complex new point you cannot finish. Reserve any remaining time for obvious errors that obscure meaning.
Should I write a full draft and copy it neatly?
That usually consumes too much of the available time. Make brief notes, then write the actual response. For handwritten practice, use readable handwriting and clear paragraph breaks; for computer practice, learn to revise without repeatedly rewriting whole sections.
How should I practise for computer-delivered Writing?
Practise typing complete essays within the time and use official familiarisation materials for the interface available to you. Check paragraph breaks and accidental deletions when editing. Do not build your practice routine around assistance such as grammar tools that will not be available in the test.
What if I disagree with the view that is easiest to explain?
Choose a defensible position you can support honestly and clearly. You are not rewarded for adopting a fashionable opinion. If you partly agree, define the conditions rather than forcing yourself into an extreme position you cannot justify.
Can planning really improve my score?
Planning can help you avoid missing a question, contradicting yourself or writing repetitive paragraphs. Its value comes from better decisions, not from the number of minutes spent planning. Practise a brief method and check whether it improves the final response.
Scores, feedback and model essays
What are the four Task 2 marking criteria?
They are Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy. They have equal weight within the task. Evaluate your argument and organisation as carefully as your vocabulary and grammar.
What does a Band 9 Task 2 answer need to demonstrate?
It must answer and explore the prompt in depth, communicate an easy-to-follow argument, use vocabulary with precision and natural control, and handle a wide range of structures accurately. The official descriptors allow extremely rare minor lapses; the target is sustained expert control, not decorative language.
Are the model essays on this page officially awarded Band 9?
No. They are original study models written to illustrate Band 9-level aims. The feedback is instructional commentary, not an examiner’s certified assessment. A score awarded in an IELTS test depends on the complete response and the examiner’s application of the descriptors.
Can one Task 2 essay guarantee Writing Band 9?
No. Task 1 also contributes to the Writing result, and both tasks are assessed. Learning a model essay does not guarantee that you can answer a different question accurately under test conditions.
Why do I stay at Band 6 or 6.5 despite using advanced vocabulary?
Possible reasons include incomplete task coverage, unsupported ideas, unclear progression, inaccurate word combinations or recurring grammar errors. Compare a timed response with all four criteria. More difficult vocabulary will not by itself solve a weakness in reasoning or accuracy.
Can an AI tool give me an exact IELTS band?
Treat automated scores as estimates rather than official results. Use tools to identify possible problems, then verify the feedback against the question and published criteria. Ask for evidence from your sentences and consult a qualified teacher when an assessment is important.
How should I use the feedback under each model?
First write your own plan or answer. Then compare the position, paragraph logic and support with the model. Read the four feedback notes and complete the transfer exercise. Borrow a technique, such as explaining a cause, rather than memorising the whole text.
What feedback should I ask a teacher to provide?
Ask which task requirement is weakest, which paragraph needs deeper development, where the reader loses the argument and which language errors recur. Request one or two priority revisions with examples from your essay. A band estimate without reasons gives you less to act on.
Preparation and common misconceptions
Are these real past exam questions?
No. The 160 questions are original practice questions covering widely taught Task 2 themes and instruction patterns. They are not presented as recalled exam papers, official IELTS questions or predictions of a future test.
Does this page contain every possible Task 2 question?
No finite collection can cover every possible prompt or combination of instructions. This bank offers broad practice across 20 areas. Train yourself to analyse new wording and adapt your reasoning rather than relying on a question appearing exactly as practised.
Which topics should I prepare first?
Start with education, technology, environment, health, work and society if these are unfamiliar, then use the full topic index to broaden coverage. This is a practical study sequence, not a claim that those topics are guaranteed or ranked by official frequency.
How can I improve from Band 5 or 6 towards Band 7 and above?
Build complete, relevant paragraphs before chasing complex vocabulary. Practise a clear position, explain one reason fully, check your recurring grammar errors and rewrite after feedback. Gradually increase flexibility and precision as accuracy becomes more dependable.
How often should I write a complete essay?
Choose a sustainable routine that includes planning, language work and revision, not only timed essays. Two or three thoroughly reviewed essays a week can be more useful than daily writing that repeats the same mistakes. Adjust the workload to your time and current level.
Should I memorise an essay template?
A flexible outline can remind you to include an introduction, developed bodies and a conclusion. A fixed script can make you miss the actual question. Practise adapting paragraph purposes to different instructions instead of inserting a topic into memorised sentences.
Can I memorise these sample answers for the exam?
Do not reproduce prepared essays. Study how the writer reasons, supports a claim and controls language, then apply those skills to new prompts. A memorised response may not answer the task, and copying is not a valid route to a reliable score.
How should I use this page for a full study session?
Choose one topic, plan a prompt without reading its model, write under timed conditions and review with the four-criterion checklist. Compare the relevant model, rewrite your weakest paragraph and record two specific lessons to apply to your next essay.
Check the official guidance
Sources and editorial notes
The practice questions, essays, examples and feedback on this page are original study material prepared for IELTS preparation. The links below support the test information and assessment guidance; they are not endorsements of this page.
- IELTS: Academic Writing test format
Task instructions, timing, length and assessment overview. - IELTS: General Training Writing test format
General Training task requirements and writing style. - IELTS: Understanding IELTS scoring
Equal weighting of the four criteria within each task and separate assessment of the tasks. - IELTS: Writing band descriptors (PDF)
The public assessment descriptors, including the Task 2 Band 9 standard. - IELTS: Writing preparation resources
Official explanations and preparation materials. - British Council: How the Writing test works
Overview of the two test versions and Writing tasks. - IDP IELTS: How to present your position
Guidance on a clear position in different essay tasks. - IELTS: Understanding question prompts
Guidance on task coverage and relevant support.
Rule references checked on 14 October 2026. Check official IELTS guidance for subsequent changes. IELTS Worldly is an independent preparation resource.
